Production of Music Video - Improvements Needed

In response to the feedback we got;

We are going to take off the shot with the road sign in it 'this road is closed' because it's disturbing and doesn't look right, moreover it's bad use on mise en scene because it's not put there deliberately.

We don't have enough close ups , so we are going to go out and shot more close ups, for example the close up by tree, we should have more of that to follow Carol Vernallis.

In some parts of the video the camera movement is shaky, we decided to use smooth cam to make reduce the it looking s shaky.

We are going to even out the pace of the editing with music because it's not in sync.